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In its characteristic nature, literature reflects the
society in which it is conceived. When and how literature should explore issues
afflicting human beings is a debate whose roots can be traced to Plato and
Aristotle’s discourses. But when writers choose to narrate about societal
issues should they exercise creativity, restraint or imaginative wantonness?
Owing to decades of squabbles between writers and
publishers in Kenya, the country has experienced a significant diversification
of the nature of book publishing. There has been a noticeable shift from what
might be considered mainstream publishing to other smaller publishing houses
and even where possible self-publishing. Although this might be venerated as a
wise move in helping to open up the industry of publishing, it is not without
its setbacks. One of the main challenges to self-publishing would definitely be
a matter of the quality of manuscripts that would be spewed out into the
market.
I have read Ng’ang’a Mbugua’s texts: Different Colours and Terrorists of the Aberdare which are
both self-published. My reviews for both have demonstrated my respect for the
writer’s conscientious efforts to give the reader a chance to interact with quality
fiction that provides good fodder for criticism and scholarly engagements. It
is also worth noting that both texts have won the Wahome Mutahi Literary Prize
for Literature in recognition of their literary value. In such a scenario, I
would not in any way fault self-publishing as a precipitous option when it
comes to publishing.
However, it would be imprudent for me to praise
self-publishing and overlook instances where the same has fallen short of the
expectation of producing texts that can stand the test of time in terms of hardy
content and the worth of their literariness. This does not mean that mainstream
publishing houses do not fall prey to such malaise – they do and indeed they
have been victims of the same. But I am not going to concern myself with a
discussion or illustration of how such firms have at times been compromised to
produce mediocre fiction. I will instead fairly lay my argument on Wanjiku
Manyatta Wambui’s The Innocence Predators.
Manyatta’s The
Innocence Predators is a self-published novel that narrates about child
molestation. It is the story of Victoria a young girl whose life is scarred
permanently by a child pest through molestation. This catastrophic act is
exacerbated by the fact that the molester is well known to Victoria and as if
this is not enough he is a revered man of God. Unknown to Victoria’s parents is
the fact that she is molested by the very person they have entrusted the care
of their daughter to. Worse still Uncle Caleb, as he is fondly referred to, is
not the person they think he is. Indeed, what everyone in this locale does not
know is that the person they consider as Caleb is a victim of HIV/AIDS, a
bitter estranged lover who has vowed to try whatever means possible to either
heal or to infect as many other people as much as he possibly can.
The
Innocence Predators
is a cautionary novel that unravels the intricacies of HIV/AIDS infections, the
myths and intrigues that have encased a disease that has remained without cure
for almost three decades now. Throughout the narrative, we discover that no one
is safe from HIV/AIDS. Although the text’s title preys on the innocence of
children to communicate the message, it is also the innocence of adults coupled
with naivety that at times costs them dearly when it comes to sex and the
vicious cycle of HIV/AIDS infections. Ironically, those who appear to be
innocent, like pious church leaders, are cast as guilty and cruel persons who
distort the philosophy of spiritual matters to pursue selfish interests.
Manyatta succeeds to use suspense and to hold the
reader prisoner until the end in order to discover what has been transpiring throughout
the lives of the characters in the text. Although the reader’s predictions are at
times true hence rendering the suspense suspect, there are enough twists and turns
in the narrative to make it a fairly interesting read. Aspects of a family’s
life, finance, social life and spirituality are dealt with in detail and the
author even broaches the delicate topic of sex amongst children and how best
parents can tackle it. At the end, the reader would appreciate that the
writer’s intentions were well meant even though the story is not as
aesthetically appealing as one would have wished it to be.
Although Victoria, the child protagonist in the story,
is diagnosed with HIV/AIDS at a tender age, the parents fight off stigma and
help her to grow into a spirited young adult who has learnt to accept and
appreciate herself. But Victoria has subconsciously vowed not to fall in love
in the fear that she would infect other people. This is however scheduled to
change towards the end of the narrative when she meets James, a young man who
seems to read her mind and heart and one who is willing to go to any end to win
her emotions.
The narrative lays bare the story of Caleb aka Jelob
aka Jack. He is the assumed youth pastor who in the initial pages of the novel
molests Victoria and infects her. It is through the narrative that we discover
he had gotten himself involved in an affair with an older woman who had not
only infected him but spurned his love when she got tired of sleeping with him.
Although Jelob had sincerely fallen in love with her, she was only interested
in young school boys. Jelob is lucky to hail from a family with a rich economic
background. His father helps him set up business when he performs dismally in
school and cannot pursue higher education.
Jelob’s change of character into a bitter individual
occurs when he discovers that he is HIV positive. At his lowest moment he
becomes a victim of an unscrupulous pastor who has started a church to prey on
gullible Christians in order to make money – Pastor Collins of THE EYE OF GOD
CHURCH. It is Pastor Collins who lies to Jelob that he can be cured by sleeping
with a given number of virgins so as to cleanse himself from the sexual sin he
has committed. The power of religion and its bewitching allure makes Jelob to
entangle himself in a web of lies, trickery and unforgivable events that
culminate in his capture by the police albeit after he has destroyed the lives
of innocent children.
Manyatta’s novel provides reprieve, remorse and
forgiveness for the perpetrators of HIV/AIDS infections. However, most of the
narrative stances appear too contrived, NGO like and generally too preachy for
a novel. The dialogue is dry, static, forced and the reader feels like the
author was under obligation to tell the story as opposed to letting the
narrative take its toll through showing. Call it authorial intrusions or
whatever else but The Innocence Predators
is a difficult text to read for those of us used to conventional fiction.
There is little effort at creativity and wherever it
appears the story gets marred by a moralistic voice that abrogates itself the
power to moderate the flow of events. This novel is punctuated by numerous
instances of telling as opposed to showing. Manyatta appears to have let her
guard down and consciously decided to sell her agenda to the reader as opposed
to narrating a story. The story would have sufficed on its own with the
different settings in the village, at the university, at the working
environment etc. without the writer forcibly having to explain virtually almost
every turn of events in the story. For example, “The girl nodded with
trepidation and fled from the man who had preyed on her innocence” (p. 111) or
“Victoria could clearly tell that James harboured some unresolved issues, his
heart was bleeding” (p. 162).
Ultimately, the story ends with a romantic tone as the
reader assumes that Victoria and James will accept each other in spite of their
differences and be willing to embrace and face an uncertain future premised on
the knowledge that they would stand side by side to weather the storms of life.
Whether this is plausible or not dents a blow to the narrative because it adds
to the pool of contrived twists that have been proffered in the novel. How some
of the characters develop a change of heart from innocence to cruelty and back
to innocence leaves a lot to be desired. Thus, as you look through the lenses
of literature and how it teaches us about child molestation in Manyatta’s
novel, take time to connect with the writer’s attempt at creativity. It is my
hope that Manyatta’s subsequent writings will exercise patience to allow
characters and the story to grow on their own.
Hey Larry . I just stabled at your blog on The Innocence Predator. Thank you for the positive critique!
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